02 Inspiration Comments

Cleverly and beautifully … many older persons not can so is figurative will be expressed …

I like it.. short... descriptive... It would help me when little rocks are in my way... I wove them over because I dont want them to get bigger...

it is a nice short poem.we have to face whatever challnges come our way. you have in four liness conveyed that. io for that

Wise wom one so young. Well done. Sue

Real inspiration Athul Krishna...well done

Short and sweet with a great message! Congrats!

it is ashort and yery effective poem in its message.you have a talent for brevity.10 on that

Mature thinking for such a young poet

Short but powerful indeed. Keep penning for I can see you have the soul of a poet, a heart of a dreamer and a pen of a prolific writer. thanks and best wishes, melvin

rise and rise..............till shine...........rules the world.....to stardom..........

i once read somewhere that a poem with 3 great ideas should be 3 lines long, a short poem with a great message, yes life is about struggle but it is sweet when you get what you desire after you have struggled long for, and thats what makes us appreciate it, gr8 poem Athul :)