Pet sorrow walks around
Presence sleeps on the edge of ware
Your breathing air is diluting
In the atmosphere.
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this poem is not idiotic, it's fantastic! : -) : -) : -) : -) : -) : -) : -) : -) : -) : -)
Lovely surrealism, a fantasy in flight, why Idiotic I disagree with the title it is unecessarily demeaning 10
You've put a smile on my face, great write! Take care, Martine