[02] Eating Baby Comments

Very good and very nice poem. I like it. (10v.) Greetings. Maria Barbara Korynt

Great imagination, I like the last few senteneces: Map was eaten up by the hunger Moon by sky- who is now Eating baby as a termite? Very wonderful, to read such lines..... Termite? Oh, termite can an estate...10.

must say you do have a way with difficult issues-how lucidly you have dealt with such a touchy nd gory image is remarkable! full 10++

Good intelligent imageries using the full moon and the crescent...well, Ashraf, you beat me all out here...I must give you a ten plus

Very imaginative poem.10++ Best Wishes.................

Many imageries pelting one after another. I hardly imagine anything and I've fnished your poem. But haha, don; t worry, It's not bad, I had to scrutinise it line by line though. It is certainly a difficult topic you're dealing with; wanting to show how viciouswe have become with this imagery of bing cannabalistic to something so close to our hearts and species- our babies. I felt you brought it out pretty well, and the imageries that you compare to let us understand the next recurring parttern is really interesting. I would have liked it better if it was just a teeny bit more leaborated though, so that I can get it easier, but that's just my own opinion. Good job an the whole!

very thoughtful work here.... well written....

Unfortunately this is true. Our planet isn't so pure anymore. Well put. Best Wishes, Marilyn