[02] Cruel Time Comments

A wonderful poem with well expressed epithets like ''cruel time'' and cognitive metaphors like: ''Time is walking on the cool wave'', used to highlight the transformation of nature under the action of time......I like it very much... so there is my little 10++ for this great poem...

flowing with depth.... as what Palas said..'i can feel but cant express' and i too cant express the impact it brings to me, my thoughts into words this piece is great...very elegant...meaningful 10++++

Nice work! I enjoy reading you.

very deep....i cant really comprehend this though lol hopefully you would describe the thoughts you are conveying in this poem?

what should i say? ? ? ? ? ? ? what a poem this is? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? keep going

'Time is walking on the cool wave' wow! amazing! ........10

I cannot recommernd this writing, but I did give it a 7, which is my highest non recommendation score. The writing is quiite good in fact. The problem is the purpose of the writing and the meaning of the lines. I cannot understand either. GW62