Friday, April 4, 2008

[02] Clean Mind Comments

Rating: 5.0

Don't try to hurt
Bullet-proof mind that puts on iron-curtain
Bayonet-sentences will fall back.
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Ashraful Musaddeq
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Sandra Holguin 24 October 2021

Ask me the question?

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Priyanka Bhowmick 18 June 2009

a butiful msg.. lets clean mind wid organic facials... lovely...10++

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Howard Kern 17 June 2009

You have been truely blessed! ! ! Keep that bullet-poof mind behind your iron-curtin! ! ! A clear mind comes to me with my morning meditation. It is the only way to recharge my gift that flows to the page effortlessly! very nice write 10+++

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let us clean our mind.. that should be message loud n clear... beautiful...10

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Miriam Maia Padua 18 May 2009

a great piece... conveys a great meaning... thoughts' provoking...as always thanks for sharing, Sir 10++

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rago rago 16 May 2009

to clean mind............last lines really provoked to think......... you have penned well............see my 10 ***

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Subroto Chatterjee 05 May 2009

I think your stint at the Bangladesh Agricultural Development Corporation has given you sufficient fodder for your amazing poems.. Case in point are the names of various flora/fauna mentioned by you... Cheers. Subroto

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Antonio Liao 26 April 2009

in a world of superficiality, all looks like something the mind can't see yet! so real that everybody wants to close their eyes, and don't like to feel of what is today....such a poem that target the truth of what is going back to the beginning of seeing the world as it exist.... what beautiful poem, that should be read to all mankind...thank you and God bless....a 10++++++

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Xxx Xxx 27 September 2008

revenge is seldom the end, clean mind, clean body, soap was invented for both i guess thanks A

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Mamta Agarwal 27 September 2008

besides the message of the poem, i am totally fascinated with the images, as varied as bullets, red ixora(flowering in my garden) . a brilliant composition, a hidden gem i discovered today. fascinating 10++

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C T Heart 26 September 2008

Clean mind is a way to clean the heart and soul...and reflects through one's behavior. Healthy to sum it all. a 10.

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Gargi Saha 25 September 2008

A lovely poem with great vocab. u get 10++++ Thanks for your lovely comment on my poem U R PRECIOUS.

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Ester Agustin 17 September 2008

as vinegar nourishes pickles... clean thoughts nourishes the soul..... i like your poem...

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Bob Blackwell 11 September 2008

Sticks and stones can break my bones, but names can never hurt me, I was told when young. when grown up it helps to remember this. Well said Ashraful.

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Estrella Baldemosa 10 September 2008

violence begets violence, it can never achieve peace. thanks... great poem

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Tsira Goge 02 September 2008

I don’t like cloudy face, .................................... For me it is intolerable too... Your idea was pleasant to me... At you 'torments' good thoughts and strong metaphors, it is good... 10............ Tsira

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Jerry Hughes 28 April 2008

................................interesting concept Ashraful

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Ashraful Musaddeq

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