Don't try to hurt
Bullet-proof mind that puts on iron-curtain
Bayonet-sentences will fall back.
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a butiful msg.. lets clean mind wid organic facials... lovely...10++
You have been truely blessed! ! ! Keep that bullet-poof mind behind your iron-curtin! ! ! A clear mind comes to me with my morning meditation. It is the only way to recharge my gift that flows to the page effortlessly! very nice write 10+++
let us clean our mind.. that should be message loud n clear... beautiful...10
a great piece... conveys a great meaning... thoughts' provoking...as always thanks for sharing, Sir 10++
to clean mind............last lines really provoked to think......... you have penned well............see my 10 ***
I think your stint at the Bangladesh Agricultural Development Corporation has given you sufficient fodder for your amazing poems.. Case in point are the names of various flora/fauna mentioned by you... Cheers. Subroto
in a world of superficiality, all looks like something the mind can't see yet! so real that everybody wants to close their eyes, and don't like to feel of what is today....such a poem that target the truth of what is going back to the beginning of seeing the world as it exist.... what beautiful poem, that should be read to all mankind...thank you and God bless....a 10++++++
revenge is seldom the end, clean mind, clean body, soap was invented for both i guess thanks A
besides the message of the poem, i am totally fascinated with the images, as varied as bullets, red ixora(flowering in my garden) . a brilliant composition, a hidden gem i discovered today. fascinating 10++
Clean mind is a way to clean the heart and soul...and reflects through one's behavior. Healthy to sum it all. a 10.
A lovely poem with great vocab. u get 10++++ Thanks for your lovely comment on my poem U R PRECIOUS.
as vinegar nourishes pickles... clean thoughts nourishes the soul..... i like your poem...
Sticks and stones can break my bones, but names can never hurt me, I was told when young. when grown up it helps to remember this. Well said Ashraful.
violence begets violence, it can never achieve peace. thanks... great poem
I don’t like cloudy face, .................................... For me it is intolerable too... Your idea was pleasant to me... At you 'torments' good thoughts and strong metaphors, it is good... 10............ Tsira
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