[02] Acquitted Desire Comments

The first stanza itself presented in an unique way and steal the heart........

'Melting heart flies over floating algae' The first pulsation of Life in algae... Not in 'Fugitive Silence' [a recent post of mine] But in Serene Silence a 10 + dr. sakti. 19.06.09. India

As always..a unique thought process...10 is a must...Brishti

As always..a unique thought process...10 is a must...Brishti

great butterfly died on heart attack i never think that way as you thought great poet keep in touch

A butterfly dies of a heart attack...Wow! That is poetic license and well wriiten prose. These fews lines show us how we live at times in a myopic way and in parallel worlds all at the same time. Good write.

'Poetry is the music of thoughts, conveyed to us in the music of language' I don't know the author of this quote but it speaks well of this poem...I love that you dared! Dorothy

Desire is rightly acquitted! I like the way you put the ideas short and sweet!

very nice indeed.......read mine on the same lines.....the day i see a purple cow

provactive metaphors descriptive and coloring, fauna of unusual scenes 10+

a poet is a magician...a poet can create magic with word... Mr. Ashraful Musaddeq....u've shown that in this poem...

Yeah, a poet should know using strange words to express an idea likes magic art., like you have done, words might be even conflicted, it is a kind of what so we called beautiful art. Good job, A. Musaddeq!

wowww... that is fabulous.. a butterfly dies of heart attack, while you were laughing at the window. .it is unique and so well expressed! !

The connections of the words are too disjointed to understand what you are really saying.

a lovely poem, unpredictable. a well hidden art in the words

Ashraful, It is pleasant to me your live and original metaphors... 10... Tsira

conflicts of metaphors, but still a great writes.

Rich imagery and i like the 'sleeping dog shaking dreams like tail' and 'the snail crossing prickle heat zone' - animated, dynamic lovely poem