A butterfly died of a heart attack
While you were laughing on the window
Catfish jumped on the bank of a tank
Cool sleeping dog shaking dreams like tail.
Trust blooms in front of summer
Melting heart flies over floating algae
Snail crossing prickle heat zone of back
Acquitted desire moves around bangle.
Poem 01
Book 'Firefly Can't Make a Day' February 2008
Copyright Writer
Rhythm Publishers, Dhaka, Bangladesh
ISBN 984-8319-63-8
'Poetry is the music of thoughts, conveyed to us in the music of language' I don't know the author of this quote but it speaks well of this poem...I love that you dared! Dorothy
Desire is rightly acquitted! I like the way you put the ideas short and sweet!
very nice indeed.......read mine on the same lines.....the day i see a purple cow
provactive metaphors descriptive and coloring, fauna of unusual scenes 10+
The first stanza itself presented in an unique way and steal the heart........
'Melting heart flies over floating algae' The first pulsation of Life in algae... Not in 'Fugitive Silence' [a recent post of mine] But in Serene Silence a 10 + dr. sakti. 19.06.09. India
As always..a unique thought process...10 is a must...Brishti
As always..a unique thought process...10 is a must...Brishti
great butterfly died on heart attack i never think that way as you thought great poet keep in touch
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A butterfly dies of a heart attack...Wow! That is poetic license and well wriiten prose. These fews lines show us how we live at times in a myopic way and in parallel worlds all at the same time. Good write.