02-23-05 Comments

I don't know how anyone can describe your poetry as 'good'. Another powerful work. I'm new to Poemhunter so I'm looking forward to more.

It's wonderful, perfect.

I wonder if humans make themselves lonely by creating and believing in love? A good poem.

fabulous. and great ending too.

Yikes, that last line was not what I wanted to hear from anybody.

If some poems (and people) are slivers, this is the whole tree. H

i especially like the very first line. people almost embed themselves into you, don't they? powerful, moving, touching. Jake

As usual powerful imagery, and some haunting alliteration. Very memorable.