(..01july3) Reflections Of A Late Afternoon (Re-Edited) Comments

Max this is really coo! I like this poem a lot! ! ! 10 for me! this going on my favorite poems list! This is an encouraging poem. Keep up the AWESOME WORK! !

Worked with my wife to further refine this one. The earlier version had these lovely comments: Metamorphhh (aka J. Crawford) (7/3/2007 10: 44: 00 PM) A very mature and enlightening perspective, Mr. Max. And we, too, are structures built by the universe, made of dreams and hope and folly, with entrances and exits, and eventually the paint fades, and we fall apart, and are eventually scrapped, and recyled...but maybe existence remembered to take a few photographs. At least, I'd like to think so...mm jim hogg (7/3/2007 3: 51: 00 PM) Puts on clear display the majesty of the thought processes and outlook of one Max Reif. Modest, ethically solid and far seeing. Strolling through this section of the vast structure you have created, at my leisure, was a true pleasure. You have good cause to rest satisfied by the side of this. It is a true work of art on what we are and the well from which our thoughts spring and are drawn. jim