Friday, October 7, 2005

0199 Constantinople Comments

Rating: 2.2

Two sisters separated soon after birth
one dark-haired, one fair, both beautiful, with shining eyes
run towards each other, eagerly, yet shyly, wonderingly,
from the two ends of a bridge
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Michael Shepherd
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Uriah Hamilton 07 October 2005

This is simply a beautiful poem!

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Max Reif 07 October 2005

I'm certainly under her spell, though I've never physically been there. This poem brings to my mind another strong piece, about Budapest, published on this site recently by Fivos Dmitros.

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Keiah Delu 07 October 2005

This was good...a mini story very fascinating.

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Mary Nagy 07 October 2005

This is beautiful. It just 'feels' so exotic...I really enjoyed this Michael. sincerely, Mary

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