Wednesday, September 14, 2005

0194 A Boy's Vision Comments

Rating: 2.7

The boy walks past the window;
you can see he's
got something clearly in his mind;
walks firmly on both feet as if
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Michael Shepherd
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Michael Shepherd 14 September 2005

This last two days, the media have been full of 'these last nail-biting weeks of swashbuckling cricket will bring a new generation of boys to the game...' and you think mmm, maybe.. and then, there it is in front of you...

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Michael Philips 14 September 2005

This poem is very different from your usual fare. It's literal and spare, with only a couple of adjectives in the whole poem. Interesting subject matter and very nice flow. Your versatility is impressive.

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Michael Shepherd

Michael Shepherd

Marton, Lancashire
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