As butterflies with beauty grace the air,
so love cannot be lazy in its love;
true love brings lovely energies to bear;
love's actions grace the true contemplative.
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I can't think which is better...your sonnets or your free verse. You do both so well. This is lovely and has a grain of truth as elusive as a butterfly. Raynette
This is beautiful in an ethereal way. I am unable to penetrate a lot of it though.
I perfectly agree with this poem's message, and the good writer has instilled in me the wish to also delve into his paraphrasation's original...