Tuesday, August 19, 2008

(017) The Fingers On The Window Comments

Rating: 5.0

The fingers on the window
disappear when I turn round
never have I seen them
nor have they made a sound
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Danny Reynolds
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Gillian.E. Shaw 01 September 2008

Masterful work Danny. Love the flow of the verse although raw and cold, the theme insights fear.

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Viola Grey 24 August 2008

this one scared me a little...must hit close to the bone...I really like it

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Danny Reynolds

Danny Reynolds

Alexandria, Scotland
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