Saturday, January 19, 2008

(017) Kites Flying At The Beach Comments

Rating: 2.8

There the kites come
Head grasped in the children’s hands
Looking for wind
While their tails get tickled by sand
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Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)
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Vijju 14 January 2021

Superb! ! ! !

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Giselle 03 December 2020

Its very well done poem😍😍😍😍😍😍😍💓

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????? 03 December 2020

Not really bad

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Unknown 01 December 2020

Love it😻😻😻😻😻

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Sarah Abdullah 16 April 2008

Lovely the way you described the Kites is Great Thx for sharing ^_^

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Francis Duggan 21 January 2008

Such a clever poem this Risha for one so young you are a brilliant writer 10 out of 10 for this excellent poem

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Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

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