Tuesday, February 25, 2014

017. I Swim Towards The Sunken Ship Comments

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Sitting upright in the mud
the proud ship waits
silent as a tree
waiting for a lonely diver
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Jaden Knight
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Bri Edwards 29 August 2014

hidden in the depths like unsolved mysteries = my favorite lines Diving faces.. i don't understand why you use diving faces, though i suppose dead submerged floating bodies could look like ghoulish divers. very interesting piece. i like it. thanks for sharing. bri :)

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