016. The Mysteries Of The Mind Comments

gee, Profanisaurus, i read again, the poem, then saw and read my earlier comment. maybe i was incorrect earlier? maybe 'you', entering his head, caused the storm and your exit caused the storm to subside! ? hmm? i like my second thought better. in which case, you are a MENACE to people's minds! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! yikes. bri :)

John aka P., you must be a natural sedative; you calmed his mind by your presence! you could make a fortune in the united states! ! ! but HOW do you get inside and back out of the head? ear, nose, or mouth entry/exit? ? a very smooth poem. i did not miss the missing punctuation. i did not miss rhyming. i found no typos! a 'great' poem for casual readers, like me. it has been sent to MyPoemList. thanks for sharing. bri :) i hope your day is going well there.