(016) On Vacation Comments
My family went on a vacation
I gave my father all the persuasion
Can I go and wander in the forest
To catch at least a tiny little pest
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My god! ! ! I will not... I am scared... If U come with me I will try regards Sandhya
What a wonderful adventurous poem! ! It was fun to read and as always it shows how talented a writer you R Risha! I enjoyed your 'favourite poem'.... Great imagery and title and I just like U would no longer go looking for a lion, tiger or a big black bear...((SMile)) Keep sharing................u r good at what u do. =Shelley=
nicely done story poem about the value of advice from guardians who know and care. Technical discipline is getting better as allocuted in my previous missives.
Maybe i should just give all your poems 10 to save time little Risha....
Exceptional vacation poem Risha......................Love and Hugs, Diane
Excellent piece of poetry from such a young writer. Well done Hugs, Dee
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7/29/2025 8:41:11 PM # 1.0.0
Great poem