You are my Lily, I am your Rose
In our Garden we repose
I watch you blossom
Day and Night
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Awwwww how sweet, I have more poems posted, please read when you have time, thanks x
Very nice to read this poem. I like it really very much. After reading this poem, I read it again. It gives your reader the feeling that you are the one person that should be among our best friends. Only bright poets with a truly loving heart can make this type of masterpieces. If my votes would register, I would give it a 10 + (but since I joined the web site, my first 3 votes went fine and ever since voting became impossible)
A delightful read! So well penned. Warmed my heart as I read, so enjoyed! ; D
This is one of the more enjoyable poems I have read in awhile, Colin, and I like very much how you told this fine tale metaphorically in your outstadning poem. I also liked your author's note, kindly giving us readers a bit of the 'back story' behind this fine poem. I always enjoy expressive poems and this one was a genuine delight to read. Carl.
Wow. This poem was wonderful. The imagry was expert. Thank you for the read, and congratualtions on your happy marrige and your children.
'Two flowers both from different pots. I think this is where my 2 worlds came in at? Deborah Cromer
I read this poem and it made me think of the last 2 lines in my poem 'Pretend'. If you have time maybe you can read it? Thanks! Deborah Cromer
Two differences to make one of the same. We are all a part of the whole in some way or another. Good poem and nice to read. DC
that is a beautiful poem.......i love it and i wish i could have writen this poem.....
Hi Colin what union could be best expressed-with flowers that you have shown with the luvli message very nice poem regards Ken e Hall
This has a soft, lilting melody to it when being read. A message well said and to be very much appreciated by the intended one.
What a delightful poem! I very much enjoyed reading it. Well constructed. Nice flow. Lovely imagery.
Lovely tender words of tribute to love that has stayed the course! . Sounds like a garden which is quite rosy. That's to be envied my friend, as there aren't that many about! Sorry I missed this Colin. The best to you sir. jim
This is romantic poetry, everyone is inspired when love is compared to flowers. Flowers possess the beauty that love has when i bloom. Worth 10 because I enjoyed it..
you are my lily, I am your rose two flowers both from different pots. sweet and touching. nice imagery