(013) My Baby Cousin (Lovely Zaara) Comments
She looks straight into my brown eyes
And creeps so very near
She pulls my hair so very hard
That I say 'oh my dear! '
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What a lovely, loving tribute to a beautiful baby girl named Zaara.
Risha, Very wonderful poem! You got my vote,10! Keep up the great work! hugs and kisses, Cassy :)
much better control of tempo and rhyme and a seemingly higher comfort level with a story that is so familiar to you. Nicely done.
A shinning star and a rising star of poetry... Risha well done 10...
Another fabulous write by Risha. I enjoyed the read, it flows nicely, lovely rhyme and the content is wonderful. I'm sure your baby cousin brings you many happy moments. I hope I'm still hear to read some of your published poetry in years to come. You my dear, will be very famous one day, never put your pen away, keep on writing, as I've said before, I'll keep on reading.---Melvina---
Risha, I wish I could have written like this at your age. It is beautiful. I think when you reach my age you will be very famous for writing wonderful things like this. Keep writing my young friend and I will come back often to read them. David
Wonderful write! I truly enjoyed reading this! Awesome job! ! !
Babies can be so much fun...it sounds like you have a wonderful new addition to your family. Hugs, Dee
you make us see and feel her presence, , , beautiful poem, well done risha
Risha, this is so cuddly and cute. A fine poem for your baby cousin. Love and hugs, Diane
a beautiful work.............. a lovely present for ur cousin wishes keep writing jibin
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7/24/2025 12:14:35 AM # 1.0.0
great poem about Zara! nice rhyming, iambic rhythm! 10+++