Saturday, October 22, 2005

0126 A Longstanding Question Comments

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It’s rather a delicate personal matter…
I could of course say I’m just asking for a friend…
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Michael Shepherd
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Julia Klimenova 05 May 2006

Mr Smith seems to be on very friendly terms with God :) I laughed at the thought of a Russian Orthodox addressing the same question to God. A really funny one. Thank you! Julia

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Esther Leclerc 17 February 2006

You've made my morning; thank you! ...

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Fox Nekitsune 04 November 2005

i get some of those kinds of email, and im female, thankyou for say what we all think.

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***** ********* 03 November 2005

Michael, don't you realise how busy god is? tut tut, next time send a text. GODs PA...Tai *Wink* definitely winking! lol 9 from me

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Ikazoboh Austine Jeffrey 30 October 2005

well, that was a lengthy one but very funny, in fact i am still laughing. but is he really called smith or john thomas? And has God answered yet?

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Ulrike Gerbig 23 October 2005

this poem put a huge smile on my sunday-morning-tired-face! thank you! ulrike

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Egal Bohen 22 October 2005

Michael, Very Good! And a lot of work.Are you sure he is called Smith? , I just wondered if his name might have been John Thomas? Regards Egal Bohen..

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Lucy Burrow 22 October 2005

Michael, Excellent, funny, well thought out and a great read, well done!

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Joy Farrar 22 October 2005

This is so well written and so funny. I know I am going to enjoy Poemhunter. Joy

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Raynette Eitel 22 October 2005

I am still laughing, Michael. Can't wait to read this to my husband. You have too many clever lines to count, and what a great conversation with god. Moses and his tablets (were they blue?) and 'longstanding' (?) too much! I hope you don't lose your wife to Mr. Jones for a very 'long time'. Raynette

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Christian Eliab Ratnam 22 October 2005

Great Write. Very witty I must say.

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Marcy Jarvis 22 October 2005

You know what god would say if she were a woman, don't you? It's your tongue that counts. (double entendre there, btw.)

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