Sunday, April 16, 2006

0120 Child On A Swing Comments

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playground
higher and higher
the swing squeaking, creaking
but firm
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Michael Shepherd
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Skadi Meic Beorh 14 July 2006

Thank you, Michael. There is nothing more touching than to have a poem written for oneself. I wish the blessing on everyone.

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Scarlett Treat 16 April 2006

I especially liked 'the freedom of limits, the limits of freedom.' Very visual for me.

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Dan Tharp 16 April 2006

hmmm... I like the comparison of the firm post to the parents love. Nice poem, Michael. dan

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