Bird of paradise
Elegantly poised, flourished
Graceful, poignant sight
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Bird of Paradise is such a beautiful flower. Your haiku sends me into flight to continue contemplating its many beauties.
Very elegant and graceful. Lovely work, Melvina. Warm regards, Sandra
Melvina what a great discription of a beautiful birds cheers Sylvie
BEAUTIFUL DISPLAY OF THE TRADITIONALIST ZEN STYLE HAIKU FORM... NATURE DRIVEN & IN PERFECT METER STANDARD...5.....7.....5 A Fine job! '''''''''''''''''''''frank
i always get an arrangement with these on mother's day...but your poem has other deep and marvelous tones. nice write, Melvina. -Tailor
((012) Foral Essence (Haiku) by Melvina Germain.) **A glimpse of nature.