Wednesday, September 27, 2006

(011) A Dream Which Never Came True Comments

Rating: 3.6

If only I could fly
And soar up so high
I want to touch the sky so blue
But it never came true
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Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)
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You write very good poetry! Keep on writing..

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Ankur 21 January 2018

I like it! Good writer.

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Akhtar Jawad 11 May 2014

I expect a bright future for this lovely poetess.

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Shihabudheen K J 29 September 2011

nice poem.good imagination.

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roushan banu 05 February 2009

WOW......................... r u really 11... i cant believe............... i wish i could right like u............... nice dream. i too dream the same.......... but it will never come true............

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Rajaram Ramachandran 20 May 2007

Better your wish is sky so high, that atleast you will go near hand-reach

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Abdul-rasheed Uyghurson 26 March 2007

What beatful dream! ! I enjoyed it with smiling.

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 14 March 2007

A little lady like you feeling blue, come on girl that just wont do... Risha... keep dreaming do... oh and 10 for you...

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Aldo Kraas 01 February 2007

This poem is very interesting

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Dee Daffodil 05 January 2007

Maybe this dream hasn't come true, but may you always follow your dreams, they will lead you far. Hugs, Dee

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Diane Violet 18 December 2006

Blue is not your color Risha, another wonderful poem. Love and Hugs, Diane

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Raghavan Warrier 29 November 2006

Risha, I feel what makes you special is that you have the imagination of a child, but the craft of a senior poet. I feel fresh after reading each of your poems. Keep writing. Raghavan uncle.

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Asma Bahrainwala 05 November 2006

dream big, gal! ! .... life is waiting for you... Asma...

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Anoop Gururaj 08 October 2006

hey nice poem dont we all wish we could fly at some point of our lives..im really quite astonished that a 8 yr girlcan write such nice poetry keep it up...

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Preeti - is here! 05 October 2006

hey, don't be blue, be ever changing like the sky. Nice poem! Preets

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Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

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