Wednesday, April 19, 2006

0102 This Is A Disposable Poem Comments

Rating: 2.4

This is a disposable poem.
Under each stanza
is a perforated line
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Michael Shepherd
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Hugh Cobb 19 April 2006

Sometime's the bathroom tissue's all we have to write on! Well done. The piece is filled with humour and just the proper amount of irony. Many won't recognize themselves in this portrait, perhaps me, too! Best with LOL, Hugh

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Gina Onyemaechi 19 April 2006

That ending's literally got me farting with laughter! ! Ha ha ha! !

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Scarlett Treat 19 April 2006

Michael, this is one of the funniest I have ever read. l absolutely enjoyed the 'end'ing, because some of what is here, including my own, are not even worth being used as toilet tissue (too thinly constructed!) Scarlett

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Daniel Williams 19 April 2006

Excuse me if I'm wrong, but I thought this site was for anyone to submit poetry to, so who are you to feel so high and mighty that you have to write poems on how you don't like other peoples poems?

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