As the sun showed it's first ray of light
I told everyone it's time to take flight
They asked me whether the adventure would be long
I said it would'nt be if we hum a nice little song
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I love my new home, it's like a dream come true Go back to my old city, a job I will never do. A lovely write.
It's a splendid poem, Risha! Write more especially about Nature. Best of luck, dear! Rahi
Risha - Do you dream about flying when you are asleep at night? I do, and I love it! I can float above the tree tops and swoop and soar. In order to take off, all I have to do is think it, then it happens. Life is like that too, if you can think it, it can happen. Keep swooping and soaring anywhere you want to go! Great poet! See my poem Dream Pockets when you get a chance. Love ya - Cheryl
What a wonderful and surprising poem! It has a great energy about it. Yes, you do have magic, to change yourself to a bird, to experience their joy. Thank you, Risha! I hope you will read another of my poems soon. Jonathan
Another impressive poem Risha...I can see why it is your favorite! Keep up the good work and I will keep reading your poetry. Happy Easter, =Shelley=
Welcome to my country little risha... i am clad my country sure does please ya... great write little lady...
ohh little poet, when i read ur poem, i was really excited, and become little jealous, why i couldnot write such lines at ur age
Here Risha Ahmed has turned into a bird to write these wonderful lines.
A beautiful little poem. I loved the flow. I gave it 10 because I think it well deserved it. Thanks for sharing it and KEEP WRITING. David
Beautiful poem. Certainly it is. You are gifted dear. I am so proud of you.
Excellent poem Risha, fabulous flow and great rhyme.--Melvina--
Lovely poem with lots of rhyming nature.... well done.
Creatively brilliant. Proud to see a 9 year old can write such a beautiful poem. carry on Risha. God bless.
I agree with verybody else. You have a natural flow and it is very refreshing to see such a talent at this age.
I too like your poems Risha. I like the adventure the birds have in this beautiful poem. You are a brilliant writer for such a young age.
this is a cuute poem.... n i agree wid prasanna...u write brilliantly at such a young age... best wishes.. Asma...
An excellent poem to have been written by you at so tender an age.