Wednesday, September 27, 2006

(010) Fellow Birds Comments

Rating: 3.0

As the sun showed it's first ray of light
I told everyone it's time to take flight
They asked me whether the adventure would be long
I said it would'nt be if we hum a nice little song
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Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)
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Subhas Chandra Chakra 24 March 2018

An excellent poem to have been written by you at so tender an age.

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Akhtar Jawad 11 May 2014

I love my new home, it's like a dream come true Go back to my old city, a job I will never do. A lovely write.

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Shujaat Rahi 09 March 2008

It's a splendid poem, Risha! Write more especially about Nature. Best of luck, dear! Rahi

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Risha - Do you dream about flying when you are asleep at night? I do, and I love it! I can float above the tree tops and swoop and soar. In order to take off, all I have to do is think it, then it happens. Life is like that too, if you can think it, it can happen. Keep swooping and soaring anywhere you want to go! Great poet! See my poem Dream Pockets when you get a chance. Love ya - Cheryl

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Jonathan Horwitz 09 May 2007

What a wonderful and surprising poem! It has a great energy about it. Yes, you do have magic, to change yourself to a bird, to experience their joy. Thank you, Risha! I hope you will read another of my poems soon. Jonathan

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Shelley L Baxter-stanley 08 April 2007

Another impressive poem Risha...I can see why it is your favorite! Keep up the good work and I will keep reading your poetry. Happy Easter, =Shelley=

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Someone Else 23 March 2007

notye forthcoming message

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 14 March 2007

Welcome to my country little risha... i am clad my country sure does please ya... great write little lady...

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Roy Storey 23 February 2007

Ill send you a message. Roy.

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David Kurian 05 February 2007

ohh little poet, when i read ur poem, i was really excited, and become little jealous, why i couldnot write such lines at ur age

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Rajaram Ramachandran 01 February 2007

Here Risha Ahmed has turned into a bird to write these wonderful lines.

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David Harris 27 January 2007

A beautiful little poem. I loved the flow. I gave it 10 because I think it well deserved it. Thanks for sharing it and KEEP WRITING. David

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Mary Das 25 January 2007

Beautiful poem. Certainly it is. You are gifted dear. I am so proud of you.

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Melvina Germain 13 January 2007

Excellent poem Risha, fabulous flow and great rhyme.--Melvina--

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Dr. Kolitha Lelwala 05 January 2007

Lovely poem with lots of rhyming nature.... well done.

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June30 Tara 25 December 2006

Simply wonderful....Risha Love Tara

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Cyclopseven R 16 December 2006

Creatively brilliant. Proud to see a 9 year old can write such a beautiful poem. carry on Risha. God bless.

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Raghavan Warrier 24 November 2006

I agree with verybody else. You have a natural flow and it is very refreshing to see such a talent at this age.

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Diane Violet 19 November 2006

I too like your poems Risha. I like the adventure the birds have in this beautiful poem. You are a brilliant writer for such a young age.

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Asma Bahrainwala 05 November 2006

this is a cuute poem.... n i agree wid prasanna...u write brilliantly at such a young age... best wishes.. Asma...

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Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

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