[01] Zero Point Comments

Open your blue-cell Let me enter into the memory card. ..... let me implant little life in it..... my strongest and hidden desire..........well conceived thought.... i admire it....10 can u just put me where did u stand last week and myself?

Very nice and intriguing.

''My nest incubates dream from your breast Your exquisite fingers intertwine into my short hair.'' nice mixed, extended, visual, cognitive metaphor, .... touching....10+++

very riveting ashra.

Veryinventive write..Stellar imagework...astute, subtle mataphoric tease...Liked this, much! F j R

A nice work of art intricately woven.10 for you.

10 for a zero point filled with oppositions both strange and enchanting

great...the last line is so up to date it made me laugh

What an odd eclectic yet apt mixture of words, this is another beautiful piece. Well done.

The moon can swim (creative, I like it) , you can use creative words, incubates...exquisite....intertwine etc...so I think to learn more and more from you, great poem. Oh, I just found your treasure on the first and last one poems, both being loved too. This one mark you 10.