ତୁମେ -01 (Tume -01 / Odia Poem) Comments
ତୁମେ ଯେବେ ଆସିଗଲ
ମୋ ଜୀବନେ ଥରେ,
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Do let me know when itbis translated in English so that I can review and comment.
The nice romantic poem my friend.I enjoy your poem very much.
ହସେ ହସେ ଭରିଗଲା ଏ ସଞ୍ଜ ସକାଳ, ମୋ ଜୀବନେ ରହିଗଲା ଏ ତ ଚିର କାଳ ।। Lovely wording in such a melodically penned composition. Keep the spirit up, Kshirod. 10+++++ for this debut attempt.
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7/26/2025 8:55:50 PM # 1.0.0
ତୁମେ ଯେବେ କହିଦେଲ ଏ ଜନ୍ମେ ମୁଁ ତୁମ, ମୋ ଜୀବନେ ଫୁଟିଗଲା ଫୁଲ ର ଏ ବନ ।.....A lovely poem! (10)