(01) The ‘gap’ Called Life! Comments

The Reality.....beautifully expressed

Beautiful carfting of words, सांस लेने से सांस जाने तक क्या कहने ज़िन्दगी हवा में है

Beautifully penned . A lesson we all know but forget .

We all must die, we know it, yet we waste time thinking about the future and don't enjoy our present life. Beautiful poem.10++

Very wise postulation…knowing the ‘Self’…indeed focus of life… 10 Ms. Nivedita UK

Your concept and expression is very good and neatly executed. mandara

Between both ends of ones being........meaningful poem written..........10

Very well written...it's a journey....of life...10++++

Call it a dream or a waking sleep, Life, no doubt, has meanings deep. CP

Thank you, for explaining the way to live a happy life so beautifully. 'Spreading love with compassion, bringing smiles to everyone! ' Wonderful lines of poetry.

Spreading love with compassion Bringing smiles to everyone! Leaving a fragrant mark indelible In this ‘Gap’ called Life! wonderful regards Sandhya

wow...a refreshing poem....not lacking in meaning.... wonderfully penned down...innovative.... thank you.

'Life is not about the breaths that we take, it is about the moments that take our breath away' Man lives a busy life. As you said, he travels in a bus, moving so fast and he forgets to enjoy the scenery outside. Man always think of what he misses, but seldom think of what he has. He always plans for tommorrow, but forget to live for today. Our life is indeed valuable. Your poem is awesome. Keep writing!

A very nice written poem, full of life and encouraging your readers to think and answer your queries.............lovely! ! ! 10+++

This ‘Gap’ called Life, What then is the purpose? To Discover my True Self By removing all Ignorance! ..........................This lines says all.........The purpose of life is to discover our true self.......Good Write..10+++........

hey Vinod jee if everyone thought like you and me that this is a transitory phase--then what a wonderful world it would be hai na-- -10 anjali

nicely written...i especially enjoyed your concluding six lines, wish i still felt the same way...if there really is an afterlife and the life we live right now is just a gap, as you suggested in your poem, it would be interesting to muse upon all the possibilities there could be to that 'after'life...great job,10+++++