Thursday, February 2, 2012

(01) Serious Stuff Comments

Rating: 2.9

Dawn had approached and it slinked and slithered about.
It smelled the strong odors with its pointed short snout.
It knew how to hunt, creeping down and staying low,
The saliva began to secrete and to flow.
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J.B. LeBuert
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Howard Savage 08 February 2016

Great poem with strong metaphors an profound structure.

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Adeline Foster 18 July 2015

An interesting nature poem. Have you tried my - Hand-Haying - Adeline

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Dave Walker 02 February 2012

A fantastic poem, really like it.

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J.B. LeBuert

J.B. LeBuert

Kenmore, New York
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