[01] Moonlit Night Comments

I have detected nil signals from the coffee-purple aroma........no signal but something new with arrivals, cool moon light, to think of right...10

'.. losing petals on the noiseless dust! ' - Such philosophical imagery! I find them to be absolutely thrilling! 10+ -Raj Nandy

I really liked reading this poem of yours since it has a deep feeling about it where a human is conscious and unconscious about things since it can be felt but isn't shown to be present which is beautifully described when you mentioned the dust moving without making its presence felt.

moonlit night in techicolor of metaphors, well done

very depressing it seems, like a late night....possibly insomnia? or too much coffee

Very eloquent. Your mind draws memorable poem pictures. The last lines are particularly effective. Kind regards, Sandra

I like your very individual style, the original approach, lack of sentimentality, the seeming coldness even arrogance in some of the poems... 'I haven’t seen anything lying on the cool eye-beds'. It is well measured however.