I don't know any lady
without eyes with zero dreams!
I've found two female legs
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I dont know any lady........ the poem flows without knowing any lady...... and the poetical power is there...........
Dear Poet, We Bengalies are indeed poet genetically and you're proving it relentlessly... Big poetic-hug to your Lady dr. sakti 25.06.09. India.
amazing use of colors this poem deserves to be a 10 and more Ashraful a great poet
I love the use of colour here Ashraful...excellent write...10+++
I haven’t noticed any woman flying like kites together with a butterfly! excellent poem superb -10 anjali
Remarkable metaphors and rhymes... Beautiful poems... Best wishes, Tsira
perhaps one day you will, the exquisite descriptions and colorful metaphors prod me into searching for that lady 10+
Wonderful lively image; I like some lines very much: 'two female legs walking on the rainbow'...'weighty eyes / in the deeper black lake / Swimming with multicolored fishes'...wonderful imagery. br, one
Indeed a fine stroke of wordyimagination… Excellently woven and dished out… Ten+ Ms. Nivedita UK Cordially invite to read comment and…my poems [Why hack my she –did you read? niv