[01] I Want Comments

All wants to be so near to their beloved to be seen and in close vicinity... superb write....10

Ultimate passion seems to surpass all odds no matter what we'd face......and this piece is extremely passionate.Awesome writes Musaddeq.

, all lovers want to be near their beloved , , , so, nearness shimmers and make them blind..........! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! simple desire...but deep...cry..! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

lovely poignant and tender,10

Delightful love poem..... your imagination is enticing...... i'm giving you a 10 on this one....

Beautiful 'wish' poem... lovely sentiments - my favourite lines are the first two... you could also just read the last line of every verse and that will be a poem in itself. Good one! Yuri*