[01] For Her Comments

Only what I can do is everything ensuing nothing Can simply act all resulting nil! ... lovely all, , beautiful call, , helplessness.. real beauty in poem...10

Only what I can do is everything ensuing nothing Can simply act all resulting nil! ... lovely all, , beautiful call, , helplessness.. real beauty in poem...10

Am I having here a critical Ashraful, who is not so satisfied with the self? The flamboyant one whom I got till now evades here....10++ Brishti...

Can simply act all resulting nil! ....... is it helplessness? what a dilema going on inmind..... well done dear...10

i def liked this one

astonishing poem! i liked it. flow of verses excellent! ....10++

moments of frustration, so well described shrieks for identity, well done 10

despite the gloominess you atleast have the words, the comforting words for her... thats a good point! keep it up

I can't stop appreciating the air of freshness and 'matter of fact' expression of beauty here, , , ,10

I like this piece...you opened it up beautifully...nice work

I love the opening stanza very much.A 10 from me.

Ashraful, Good poems... But the problem is itself in virtual to a problem. 10... Thank you for the comment. Tsira