Feels are but invisible pet
sleeping on the polished table
Sometimes they wake up silently
As the frequency of air changes.
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This is an excellent piece of modern poetry! I can never express myself in such abstract and fine imagery! 10! -Raj Nandy
Richly metaphorical. Your dreamscape is filled with sound, Imagery and colours. You handle the English language in a very unique way. Ten for you. Warm regards, Sandra
Feelings are really varied in moods is what is nicely displayed in this poem of yours. It was nice reading this thoughtful poem.
Feels are but invisible pet... .......................................................... You have once again presented yourselves as the present master of words and the magnificent trainer of feelings. Very modern. The good fellow,10.... Tsira
you surprised me with your mordenism! ! passion and hi-tec! ! ! you're great!
Nice metaphysical point of view to the feelings and the bonsai and butterfly again - wonderful images - they fit to almost every poem. Well penned. BR, one
Very good and interesting writting. Beautiful poem. (10v.) MBKorynt