long walk at night
the breeze freezes my spirit
the moon warms it up
pulling at my poetic soul
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even the insects with the lamps start to lend me their lights between the twinke of the stars they dance, sing, beat out a dance beautiful lines.
a wonderful poem of being inspired by the light of the mood and stars shining bright? .............well written.
Verse by verse! With the muse of life. Thanks for sharing.
before gracing the written page long walk in the night even the insects with the lamps start to lend me their lights between the twinke of the stars they dance, sing, beat out a dance breeze, love lorn stars, the moon, dance, music, poetic soul. so many points are expressed in this beautiful poem. like it very much dear poet. thank you. tony
John, your poem holds so much beauty. The images brought me right there sharing your walk in paradise. Much enjoyed.
Really fantastic imagery, John! Your poetic soul transcends time and space, placing the beauty of this poem amid the divine. Very well written, beautifully held rhythm, I love this poem. Thank you so much for sharing it. RoseAnn
What a wonderful descriptive work...before the night walk is over a poem born with all the night's harmonies10++++++++
John, This is really beautiful. I have not enjoyed reading a poem so much in a long time. This will go into my favorites. It's just so lovely and I had expected to read a haiku. This was such a lovely surprise to my evening. Thank you so much. Kind regards Gypsy It was the title that made me look at it.
" Long walks at night the breezes freezes my spirit" beautiful lines.so beautiful poem 100+++++++++