Monday, April 18, 2005

01and The Moon And The Stars And The World Comments

Rating: 3.5

long walk at night
the breeze freezes my spirit
the moon warms it up
pulling at my poetic soul
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john tiong chunghoo
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Bhagabat Prasad Hotta 07 May 2019

" Long walks at night the breezes freezes my spirit" beautiful lines.so beautiful poem 100+++++++++

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Akhtar Jawad 07 June 2018

even the insects with the lamps start to lend me their lights between the twinke of the stars they dance, sing, beat out a dance beautiful lines.

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Dfjgg 29 May 2018

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Tom Allport 19 June 2017

a wonderful poem of being inspired by the light of the mood and stars shining bright? .............well written.

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 March 2016

Verse by verse! With the muse of life. Thanks for sharing.

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Dr Antony Theodore 27 March 2016

before gracing the written page long walk in the night even the insects with the lamps start to lend me their lights between the twinke of the stars they dance, sing, beat out a dance breeze, love lorn stars, the moon, dance, music, poetic soul. so many points are expressed in this beautiful poem. like it very much dear poet. thank you. tony

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Simone Inez Harriman 29 October 2015

John, your poem holds so much beauty. The images brought me right there sharing your walk in paradise. Much enjoyed.

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Roseann Shawiak 18 December 2014

Really fantastic imagery, John! Your poetic soul transcends time and space, placing the beauty of this poem amid the divine. Very well written, beautifully held rhythm, I love this poem. Thank you so much for sharing it. RoseAnn

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beautiful writings in the poem and loved it.

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Paul Judges 04 May 2010

Well written, John!

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Rafique Farooqi 21 September 2009

a wonderful write, i am highly impressed by your works,

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Indira Renganathan 29 April 2009

What a wonderful descriptive work...before the night walk is over a poem born with all the night's harmonies10++++++++

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Paul Josef B. 15 December 2008

The first five lines are fantastic!

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James Foulk 21 November 2008

such a beautiful piece of well written poetry

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Patricia Gale 12 September 2008

Wonderful imagery..... seen through a poet's words.

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Ada Shelley 11 September 2007

Very nice......I loved the language

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Luis Gil 03 April 2007

May this walk be long...... Good poem, John. Thanks

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Andrea Szyhowski 23 May 2006

The only word that can to my mind was WOW!

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Scarborough Gypsy 18 April 2005

John, This is really beautiful. I have not enjoyed reading a poem so much in a long time. This will go into my favorites. It's just so lovely and I had expected to read a haiku. This was such a lovely surprise to my evening. Thank you so much. Kind regards Gypsy It was the title that made me look at it.

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Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia
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