(008) Troublesome Creatures Comments

The poem shows her mental age is more than12. A nice write.

nice warning poem.i liked it

But U the little one is a preacher... regards Sandhya

Superb poem. Thanks.

cute udea and nice warning with some new words to my experience. will add them to my vocabulary base

Very cute and how true also. Risha, you are one clever girl.

Yes Risha, they are troublesome creatures, wonderful write! ! Love and hugs, Diane

Risha, another delightful offering from your eloquent pen I loved the poem, but not the little insects you spoke about. Thanks for sharing it. Big10 from me. David

Buzzing around my head how i wish the darn things where dead... Risha... Like your great poems little lady... Always buzzing inside my head...: ->

nice risha, I avoid the 'sting' too.

THAT WAS EXCELLENT! ! ! ! ! Great write. Smiles N Hugs Rissa: -)

risha I read your three latest works. enjoyed too like other of yours... continue dear daughter.....more and more 'a load'.... Iexpect UNCLE

a cute poem, Risha... indeed, these mosquitoes are real troublesome creatures! ... never thought they could be blasted like this in verse! ... love, Asma...