My head is burning with her gripes
Why am I always wrong not right?
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In a moment of self pity you write mans woes believe me join the club...well done...The title....Love comes in Waves could also be 'What have I Done' Your truthful thats why she loves you.....regards
We’ve been together all this time Let's turn the water back to Wine To drink together for all Time The desire to reclaim an earlier beautified emotional bond is exquisite. This was the first of your poems I had read, and after a few frustrating days of bothersome problems, the joy of discovering your work is bliss. So tired but so appreciative my friend.
Lovely poem, and oh so true. True love that can stand the test of time and our ever changing lives, is a worth fighting to keep! Keep up the good fight! Best wishes. Kathleen
This is really a beauty. A heart poured out as poem sathya narayana
lovely poem.. you touched my heart with this.. best regards, joan d.h.
wow i loved reading your poems goodluck, and keep up the wonderful work
I love it! perfect details, nice outline, wonderful! flawless! 10 out of 10!
'Why am I always wrong not right' I have the same problem today, but somehow they do not matter anymore. Really liked this poem, love really does come in waves, but sometime we can be swamped by it. Great write, keep writing. Bob
Wonderful.. Her Heart will always be with mine.. these words have special meaning.
love does come in waves and so does the pain of missing someone...
Oh, yes Colin..Love comes in waves..But maybe because of our pride that sometimes we cannot see the other side of the coin..love this, Colin, you really did justice of what Love is...thanks, it's so beautiful.. hugs, Meggie
I really liked this poem. Sometimes love can wither in the fray, but it is inherent in the nature of so many of us to try desperately to revive it. Inspiring and sad at the same time.
Angst mixed up with truth. It works. t x
Goodness this is so wonderful....Yes by all means hold on to it. Make it like it once was so no one wants to let go.....the aftershock of the leaving never departs and it takes with it pieces of your heart....yes, we have to love ourselves first but it's always nice to have one to love and when you don't....not so nice.....marci.xo
Love, sometimes sweet, while sometimes painful, but we all need it and can't part with it even for one minute. Forgive my limited English, I enjoy your poem.^_^
If you go back to the innocence and sweetness when love was new, maybe you can recpature the old emotions. We all start out as fine wine, but lose our taste over time. That doesn't mean we haven't aged well - vintage is good! Linda
excellent poem. emotions are well expressed. a fifty-fifty relationship sounds better to me.