Sunday, November 19, 2006

008: Love Comes In Waves Comments

Rating: 4.6

My head is burning with her gripes
Why am I always wrong not right?

Continually…
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Colin Johnston
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Heather Wilkins 31 May 2013

excellent poem. emotions are well expressed. a fifty-fifty relationship sounds better to me.

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Ken E Hall 01 August 2010

In a moment of self pity you write mans woes believe me join the club...well done...The title....Love comes in Waves could also be 'What have I Done' Your truthful thats why she loves you.....regards

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We’ve been together all this time Let's turn the water back to Wine To drink together for all Time The desire to reclaim an earlier beautified emotional bond is exquisite. This was the first of your poems I had read, and after a few frustrating days of bothersome problems, the joy of discovering your work is bliss. So tired but so appreciative my friend.

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Kathleen West 31 March 2009

Lovely poem, and oh so true. True love that can stand the test of time and our ever changing lives, is a worth fighting to keep! Keep up the good fight! Best wishes. Kathleen

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Sathyanarayana M V S 05 August 2008

This is really a beauty. A heart poured out as poem sathya narayana

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lovely poem.. you touched my heart with this.. best regards, joan d.h.

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lila uzamkui 05 July 2008

wow i loved reading your poems goodluck, and keep up the wonderful work

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Bernard Tommy Vue 17 May 2008

I love it! perfect details, nice outline, wonderful! flawless! 10 out of 10!

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Bob Blackwell 26 April 2008

'Why am I always wrong not right' I have the same problem today, but somehow they do not matter anymore. Really liked this poem, love really does come in waves, but sometime we can be swamped by it. Great write, keep writing. Bob

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Michael K 12 April 2008

Wonderful.. Her Heart will always be with mine.. these words have special meaning.

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poetry lover 30 October 2007

Love comes in waves I love it. great write.

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Dana Lamb 27 October 2007

love does come in waves and so does the pain of missing someone...

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Meggie Gultiano 10 September 2007

Oh, yes Colin..Love comes in waves..But maybe because of our pride that sometimes we cannot see the other side of the coin..love this, Colin, you really did justice of what Love is...thanks, it's so beautiful.. hugs, Meggie

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Working Title 02 September 2007

I really liked this poem. Sometimes love can wither in the fray, but it is inherent in the nature of so many of us to try desperately to revive it. Inspiring and sad at the same time.

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Ivor Hogg 07 August 2007

Its no that hard to accept she's aye richt.

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Angst mixed up with truth. It works. t x

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Edna Javelosa 16 June 2007

Outstanding way to express feelings of love..

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Marci Made 15 June 2007

Goodness this is so wonderful....Yes by all means hold on to it. Make it like it once was so no one wants to let go.....the aftershock of the leaving never departs and it takes with it pieces of your heart....yes, we have to love ourselves first but it's always nice to have one to love and when you don't....not so nice.....marci.xo

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Yang Psyche 01 April 2007

Love, sometimes sweet, while sometimes painful, but we all need it and can't part with it even for one minute. Forgive my limited English, I enjoy your poem.^_^

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Linda Ori 25 January 2007

If you go back to the innocence and sweetness when love was new, maybe you can recpature the old emotions. We all start out as fine wine, but lose our taste over time. That doesn't mean we haven't aged well - vintage is good! Linda

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