Rainbow Striking red roses
Perfume so luxurious
Symbol of true love
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Hello Jasper! ! This is a lovely poem indeed.. Very nice to read.. I love when poets write these kinda stuff.. This kinda stuff always have a soothing effect on my brain... Very good to get away from the complex and hectic life we live these days.. Nice.. regards Shan
Excellent use of imagery and color. I like what you have seen from your own personal window on the world. Kind regards, Sandra
I loved the symphony of fragrant images in light and sound of your Rainbow. A beautiful piece of poetry. CP