006. The Power Of Nature Comments

this line and the last line of the poem puzzled me. the beast of the ocean waits it wasn't a bad poem, but i felt it far from your best, some of which are extremely good. but i'm glad to read one of yours dealing with 'nature', instead of love and conflict among humans. yeah, i'm not a big love poem fan, and conflict can be less than appetizing, though you deal well with both in poems. thanks for sharing. bri :)

Great poem! I love nature poems and this one really hit the nail on the head!