Friday, June 30, 2006

0053 More Heartstone Than Headstone Comments

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Here lies the grave
of the very, very brave -
pray mark it with a song
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Michael Shepherd
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Mireille Laborie 30 June 2006

It's so so true. cemeteries are full of very brave's tombs.

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Brian Dorn 30 June 2006

Michael, perfect use of the word 'arguably.' You make a valid point... well done! ! Brian

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Padraic O' Reilly 30 June 2006

This is incredible work. The language use is perfect. Nicely done.

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Danny Reynolds 30 June 2006

What nobler cause could there be for improving the rhymes in your poetry? Nice one Michael.

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 30 June 2006

Nicely said! ! ! ! !

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Michael Shepherd

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