Saturday, May 5, 2007

005-Startle Me Comments

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Blood veins and locked chains
The things you will have to cross
A far away journey to encounter
It is an adventure to reach the boss
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Alison Cassidy 25 September 2009

Chess and childhood are unlikely bedfellows and yet they work a treat in this fascinating poem about personal struggle, choice and the search for perfection. Your final stanza is poetically very strong indeed. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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