Monday, October 3, 2005

005 Poetry Fix Comments

Rating: 4.9

It’s Friday night, late
Daylight drank up its last call hours ago
and passed out in the cab on the way home
My body has taken the night off, down for the count,
...
Read full text

Lori Boulard
COMMENTS
David Dennis 06 December 2006

That was me last night... started one, brain dead, then went home on the bus. Bugger me if I didn't run into the one woman in this world I'm in love with and I didn't have the brain left to make a decent conversation. It was one of those conversations that mostly happens long after its over. You know... thats what I shoulda said. Tomorrow I will fix it (the poem i.e. It's too late for the conversation) Another brilliant write Lori. Another for the faves list.

0 0 Reply
fanniesson - 17 September 2006

good description gave me the rushes

0 0 Reply
Eric Paul Shaffer 10 January 2006

Enjoyed this poem-the message is a good one.

0 0 Reply
Ivy Christou 06 October 2005

I can relate to you so much with this poem and any poet who will deny that he can relate to any part of this poem will be a liar! Nice poem! HBH

0 0 Reply
Mary Nagy 06 October 2005

Isn't it addicting? I'm glad you wrote this, it really sums up how I feel about this website. I am always checking what new poems are posted...etc. Great poem. sincerely, Mary

0 0 Reply
John Kay 03 October 2005

Lori...As usual, I like the intensity of your work. By the way do you know Locklin and the folks at Pearl Magazine in LB?

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success