Tuesday, February 25, 2014

005. A Volcano Erupts Comments

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The lonely darkness
swallows up the light of day
nothing is left of the light
but a thin pin prick
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Jaden Knight
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Bri Edwards 25 April 2015

Poetry Eruption lesson? appropriate. never leave home without a notebook, or a writing stick. bri :)

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Nancy Oyula 15 September 2014

Nice one...............

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Farina Afrin Malik 15 May 2014

The description is really quite vivid. I loved how it gave me a vibe of the essence of Lord Of the Rings.

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