Sunday, December 14, 2008

004 I Give You Kiss Comments

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birds flying low
feathery clouds too
elephant grass flowers
betray soft wind
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Manonton Dalan
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Bethany Williams 21 March 2010

Its really a nice poem. But I really don't understand it. Bethany

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*Trusting You* 23 December 2008

i can hear giggles of joy from kids discovering their toy kids are the best thing in this world. Crystal

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Mohammed Albalushi 14 December 2008

your poem is story which i enjoye reading it, thank you for sharing it with us

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Manonton Dalan

Manonton Dalan

virginia, usa
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