(004) A Snake In My Garden Comments

Very funny!

nice poem. thanks for sharing. keep writing.

interesting piece of work. I enjoyed reading it. keep writing thanks for sharing.

Narrative technique well squeezed. Good

You can be funny too! Again a 10 from me.

Great poem. I love the twist!

There is somebody else who always tricks me with poems, and now you are doing it too! Oh, what is the world coming to? I really like this one. You are a master story teller probably from historical genetic lines of story tellers, am I correct?

Amazing poetic story with a great sense of humor...10 for this.

wow... from start to end wonderful done the last part i laugh so hard it still hurts..10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ amazing is what you are...... Peace and happy new year

risha i will tell this poem to my little sons sure they will laugh a lot... +10 for a 10 year old...

risha, the police the firemen the press and every reader of this poem including me you turned each of us a fool using your garden hose! I really enjoyed your poetic naughtiness! God bless you! a ten out of ten for you!

so tender but so talented....beautiful poem

What a wonderful joke I find at the end. It was a great suspense for me from the start to the end.

Wonderfully imaginative poem... I love the humor captured in the last line.

What an interesting event! Oy my...one mile long snake! I'm thrilled, my little brave child! I'm really thrilled! Rahi