Tuesday, August 22, 2006

0038 Underthings Comments

Rating: 2.0

See this table top. Smooth, waxed
to a point, a soup stain which perhaps
a finger nail will lift. Beneath the surface,
atoms, molecules, tension and release,
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Michael Shepherd
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What a fabulous progression of language playfulness, Michael....this jumps and starts like an old reel-to-reel film...luring the reader into a bit of self-exploration of her own. Wow!

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Daniel Tyler 22 August 2006

To see things in different ways and to appreciate what is underneath: rare gifts, Michael. A finely crafted poem which shows free verse is a discipline of expression.

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Michael Shepherd

Michael Shepherd

Marton, Lancashire
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