Saturday, July 15, 2006

0030 Your 'My Life' Exercise Book... Comments

Rating: 2.5

Buy a child's red-covered
'My Exercise Book'
like the one you bought
all those years ago
...
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Michael Shepherd
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kskdnj sajn 29 July 2006

Thanks for the reminiced moments. Yes, when life is full of hope and everything looks simple... Enjoyed.

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Scarlett Treat 15 July 2006

Every word of this takes me right back to my childhood - even that 'death grip' that I would have on my pencil and the excitement of a brand new, clean, bright red notebook....how well you describe that time.

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 15 July 2006

I enjoy the images and sniffing the 'cedar flakes' of this piece. Nice work, Michael. Thanks. L

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Preeti - is here! 15 July 2006

Mighty impressive poem! A fine read....i like the whole descriptive invovled therein. Preets

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Nalini Hebbar 15 July 2006

a beautiful picture you have painted...especially the one about the child 's head being so close to the page...lovely read...love...nalini

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