Saturday, November 5, 2005

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I’ve only got to say the word…and
I can hear the male murmur murmur right now
mixed with a hurhur hurhur as of naughty boys…
suddenly lips and fingers have their vivid, hungry memories…
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Michael Shepherd
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Angela Norris 08 May 2007

Stunning Mr Shepherd, simply stunning. I'm newish to this site, so it's going to take me quite a while to read all the poems, I may falter on my journey and I may lose interest, but I won't lose interest in yours. Thank you for making my day better.

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Cecilie Bækkedal 28 March 2006

The idea of memories on one's fingertips is very fascinating. This is love beyond desire, that's for sure. A beautiful, almost sacred work. I'm very touched. Thank you for a delightful read!

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Karina . 05 November 2005

I too am left surprised by the reading...wonderful piece of work, entirely diff. than i expected from the title- ;) K-

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Alice Vedral Rivera 05 November 2005

This is so touching - not what I expected from the title. avr

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Raynette Eitel 05 November 2005

This brought tears to my eyes...so caring and loving and tender...a surprise to the reader, given the title. I am wondering whether you might want to give the poem a different title. Just a thought. Raynette

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Michael Shepherd

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