Tuesday, February 25, 2014
003. My Gerbil Comments
Rating: ★5.0
My gerbil standing proud
On two feet she looks around
Grabbing the bars with two paws
She bites them with her tiny jaws
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Hannah Wolton-carr
25 April 2014
Aw, cute. Try and find a rhythm to stick to. I assume thats what would fit given the meaning of the poem. Unless your gerbil is having a little discord, hehe.
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7/19/2025 4:49:46 PM # 1.0.0
what does Claire aka Clare have more time yet to do? ? an interesting insider's view into the life of a little bundle of fur. quite realistic i'd say, though i never had a pet gerbil... i enjoyed it. thanks for sharing. bri :)