My dormant anklets
Hit a grit
On the shallow coast
Of my unexplored shore
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u packed so many metaphors that i need a second reading!
a lovely picture of a poem...your past memoirs bruising in...an d a painting of it in memory...absolutly poetic
yeah, quite an interesting poem...showing power of past over the present; which is taken aback, usually, being incapable of facing the unforgettable past, dear....
oh! yes; an encounter with the past on the shallow yet unexplored shores of your dreaming mind...eloquent write Sandhya...you bring in lots of metaphors all through this write...10
You've created a lovely image. I enjoyed reading it thanks.